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Kelli's Descent Ch. 03

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by jleetechie01/18/15

Gorean theme

Really liking the story, sensing the Gorean theme even more strongly. Glad the authors are sending in their chapters quickly. Keep it up!

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by socalgyrl0801/18/15

Zizzling

turning up the heat, eh? i feel it!! more!!

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by steph2004ster01/18/15

Exactly what i need

...on a cold winter day. Saving heating bill by reading your story.

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by aznlookinguy01/18/15

nothing original but

I don't see anything very original here, but the wording and excellent writing style make it more than worthwhile.

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by melsdad01/24/15

I'm hooked and wanting to read more

Loving this story, it's pace is most arousing.

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