Is there a moral to our story, of course. Never let the person that you are in love with get away from you. If you love them, make damn sure that you let them know.
And seems he completely FORGOT he had kids. 1 * for this boring piece of crap.
Wow rarely have I read a story that was so poorly plotted along with prose so stilted with beliefs so impossible. I agree with comments about it lacking any emotional substance and being a laundry list. And the comment about never letting the one you love go. In reality if there is love sometimes the only thing is to let it go. To try to hang on causes pain to all involved. That is not love but obsession.
Thanks for all of the comments, even the negative ones.
I certainly never forgot my children. They know my story and support me 100%. Did I leave out a lot of what went on in my failed marriages, of course. I wasn't the only one to blame but I left out that part of the story only trying to get to what happened with my wife when we got together.
I don't claim to be a writer, so if what I wrote and how I wrote it bothers you so much, sorry but I sucked in English and was only trying to tell a story as best I could.
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Anonymous01/24/15
Sweet story
Although it wasn't award winning writing, I loved the story. My husband is quite the romantic. We were together 15 years ago, split up and have been back together for almost 2 years and better than ever!
English
Is there a moral to our story, of course. Never let the person that you are in love with get away from you. If you love them, make damn sure that you let them know.
And seems he completely FORGOT he had kids. 1 * for this boring piece of crap.
This was more like...
A checklist of how to be a depressing, maungy, cheating, selfish wanker.
No emotional impact whatsoever.
loved it
I needed to hear this today, and Im happy that you and your love made it back to each other! xxxooo
So bad
Wow rarely have I read a story that was so poorly plotted along with prose so stilted with beliefs so impossible. I agree with comments about it lacking any emotional substance and being a laundry list. And the comment about never letting the one you love go. In reality if there is love sometimes the only thing is to let it go. To try to hang on causes pain to all involved. That is not love but obsession.
sorry if it bothered you
Thanks for all of the comments, even the negative ones.
I certainly never forgot my children. They know my story and support me 100%. Did I leave out a lot of what went on in my failed marriages, of course. I wasn't the only one to blame but I left out that part of the story only trying to get to what happened with my wife when we got together.
I don't claim to be a writer, so if what I wrote and how I wrote it bothers you so much, sorry but I sucked in English and was only trying to tell a story as best I could.
Sweet story
Although it wasn't award winning writing, I loved the story. My husband is quite the romantic. We were together 15 years ago, split up and have been back together for almost 2 years and better than ever!
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