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It's one thing to write about this trash,
but you should be ashamed of yourself for doing so badly. This reads like it was written by a 12 yr. old.
Childish
I'm sure a ten year old could write better than this trash.
This story does not deserve rating
This story does not deserve a rating. It appears to be written by a spineless male with a female mentality. I cannot see a child degrading himself or herself in writing trash like this.
The fuck is wrong with the author?
In what reality is this even erotic?
The reason why is...
The author is one sick asshole who gets his (hers) rocks off by being abused in writing.
Can This Be Any More.Cliche or Non Erotic?
Lets see? Cock cage? Check. Creampie? Check. Future denial? Check. Humiliating spouse? Check. Unplausible? Check.Well at least you did not have to think outside your sick little.box.Unoriginal garbage.You probably have a talent unfortunately writing is not one of them.Lastly why in every one of these cuck stories the spouses.start out loving one another and inevitably the wife ends up hating her husband and treating him like something on the bottom of her shoe.Why would they possibly stay married? Even for fiction without a hint of being real it does.not work.This does not work on any level.I
If you like cuck storioes like dear annony does
you'll LOVE this one. It has everything to make this annony's dream come true. Gave it a big old 5
Divorce
Divorce is an option
LOL
I'm surprised this writer even allows scoring, since he does away with them in short order. Only a cuckie lover, like bonnie, would even score something like this. Didn't have to read this story to know it's trash. No score. Unlike bonnie I don't score worthless non-erotic stories, only the "trolls" do that. Hope you got your panties in a twist bonnie over the anonymous. We aim to please. Keeps you happy. (ML)
This was simply stupid
Even for fiction it's impossible to imagine a man with so little spine. How does he even stand up? What did you think was clever, interesting or entertaining about this mess? You certainly couldn't have thought it was erotic in any way shape or form. Just plain disgusting. Never post again.
As I predict in part 2...
This story has gone down since part 2, where I wrote: "His obsession is already mining their marrigae, soon will destroy her respect for him and then the marriage will end..."...And finally that happened...Nor he, neither her undestand what they were doing wrong...This story should have ended in part 2...
Why... ! ?
I do not understand why a husband would push his wife in to the arms ( on to his cock ) of another man. Who tall, fitter, younger, more handsome, bigger cock, better lover, more dominate, and even wealthier or for the pleasure of his wife !
I do understand the need to be humiliated, dejected, disrespected and even a voyeur aspect of the husband.
Then the cucks agree that the wife is correct in never allowing them to have intimate sex with her ever again,...why would a husband agree to this ! ?
I can understand it all being an act while the lover is there to fulfill a fantasy. Why does it then become a life style with complete denial of sex from the wife to the husband.
The lover gets free pussy which is clothed, clean, feed, and cared for by the husband who has to sleep in a spare bedroom in his own house which he pays for ! ?
I do not get it at all... !
The writer needs to find another outlet for his .....
Lack of talent writing about something that is as boring as this piece.......
A Bit Unrealistic
While the story was creative and well written I though it unrealistic at the end. The wife goes from a loving person who promises her husband sex if he want it to a full-blown dominatrix overnight. Oscar goes from a guy with some fantasies to a cuckold which was the object of his fantasies, but does than make him automatically her chastened slave? That ruined the story for me. I think it would have been better if they continued as a loving couple while she was fucking Robert almost daily. There would have been so many more creative possibilities to the story that way.
re: saying no definitely wasn't an option.
Uh, yes it is. Telling someone who doesn't love you to fuck off is ALWAYS an option.
Well the naysayers are having a field day again!
@Whackdoodle you say "In what reality is this even erotic?"
That's just it, doofuss. This site isn't really about reality, it is FANTASY! You folks take this stuff way too seriously!
If you don't like cuckold stories, don't read it, but don't trash a writer's work just because you don't like the subject matter. If you do like this genre, then this will be a good one.
The humiliation with the young neighbor lady is a nice touch.
What could happen, though, is that when Robert tires of Irene, or she of him, Irene will have a change of heart, tell Oscar "see where your fantasy has led?" Because of her real love for him, she claims enough is enough, and refuses Oscar anymore fantasy life, and demands that they return to their former married relationship.
5 *'s just to offset and piss off the naysayers, and because at least you can spell and write readable sentences.
brilliant
i had a real good laugh at this one, i think this author is brilliant , he has everyone in uproar at the complete nonsense he writes, how anyone could believe he would actually enjoy the lifestyle he writes about here is ridiculous, is'nt it?............
What
What a waste of time to read....not sure what the author's goal is but no matter how I approach this series I find nothing to enjoy in it......so, I have wasted enough time on it and on comments about it...to those who enjoy it, all power to you, but as for me....."The End".
Good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!
Garbage.
An author should at least try. This one does not as the output is garbage.
Sorry, this one is so outrageous, so abusive, torturous and so ridiculous.....
....that no amount of exception-making or excusing can bring me to buy into any of it.
Mr. Wee Willie cannot be so submissive as to tolerate and enjoy public abuse, torture and injury at the hands of his wife, their neighbors, her lovers and anyone else you can muster.
Why not kill this ridiculous and cruelly childish drivel and move on to writing a story with some purpose?
No comment.
You are not worth it.
Awesome!!!
What a brilliant story is!!!
I love that.
I gave you five stars.
Plz never mind other comments.
And you guys claim to be straight.
When you act like a little bitch, you are a little bitch.
Love your stories
Don't listen to the pathetic negative comments - I am always amazed how these people occupy their sorry lives by continuing to make negative comments.
I love your stories, please write more. They are absolutely fantastic
Denial
Another repressed homosexual fantasy. Barely repressed. Okay, it's thoroughly gay.
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