All Comments on 'Contrast Ch. 02'

This is so good that I am now convinced you belong in the upper echelon of writers/authors- and not just on Lit.

Five.

AWESOME.

This is a wonderfully flowing story. Great job freegirl2012

It takes a very talented writer to tempt me out of the "Romance" category, but I will follow your writing into almost any category/neighborhood on Lit. Although I have no aversion to this particular category, the premise of nameless sex with a stranger is not something that usually appeals to my romantic sensibilities. But you did it. You've made anonymous sex not only appealing, but incredibly hot and sexy with enough intrigue to keep me checking the site for your next chapter. I really hope it works out for "Bitch" and "Fuck". (5 stars, of course!)

Why I like this so much. It just so good. I can't wait for more!

@Tallygirl1: Your comment makes me glow.

@Anonymous, Khamalani, and freegirl2012: You guys are five stars, awesome, and great too!

@DonnaBeck: I find it very hard to write erotica without romance ... to the extent that I really haven't ever tried, even in some of my more bizarre, sci-fi kind of stories.

@fawnsage: I don't consciously try to write "art." But I think your reaction is exactly what countless artists hope to provoke with their work. I truly appreciate the way you've expressed it.

Your premise of anonymous sex is hot! I think you can take this story in several directions. But where ever or however you do it, I will be there reading it !

You have a good thing going with this story!

***** 5 stars plus!

Glad you like it so far! Part 3 should be ready sometime later this week. : )

I did an internal happy dance when I saw this post, and I didn't think it was possible, but their story keeps getting better. Feel free to add more chapters if you like, I'll keep coming back!

If I add too many chapters, it will start getting hard to make the next one better than the last one ... but I'll see what I can do. : )

Thanks for being so enthusiastic!

...how I missed reading this part after ch. 1!

Enthralling and so hot. They're connecting and I love how you picture her internal struggle on telling him more/wanting to share with him. They both want each other for more than the sex and I hope I'll be reading that soon. Love the alternation of him/her/them. Brilliant in detail and premise. 5*

Thanks! I hope you enjoy parts 3 and 4 as much as these first two.

I can FEEL them, not just their desires but their fears, longing and wonderment. Simply wonderful writing.

J

I do really like these two and admit a certain pride in the level of characterization I managed to squeeze into an almost-all-sex-scenes story about two unnamed protagonists. Thanks for the affirmation so that I don’t just feel like I’m being egotistical by thinking that way!

I love this story and it is in the top five of my favorite stories on this site. You are an inspiring writer. Thank you for this amazing character development of a story.

You’re very welcome, and thank you right back for taking the time to comment! I’m sure it seems a small thing to most readers, but I just can’t tell you how much it means to me to hear that people are affected by my work.

Have a terrific New Year!

Please publish this book. It’s so good

Literotica rules say authors aren’t supposed to link to their books, but if you look, you should be able to find it!

Fantastic story. I’ve read it six or seven times now and still love it. Thank you!

eat that fine black pussy !

@Anonymous ("Fantastic story")

Thanks! It always makes me feel good to hear that people find my stories worth re-reading.

@YourWhiteDaddy

I can appreciate that advice!

Really enjoying this

@JohnnyRebBB: Thanks, glad to hear it!