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Great!
Very nice tie up. I had it down to Lisa and Connie and missed the plates of lunch part. Looking forward to Don's year finaly starting. Did you just out Moriarty? Oooh the game is on, thank you!
Oh please
Let this be the end - forever. You lack any type of cleverness or originality to be a writer. A five year old could write more interesting things. Stop posting.
terrific
ANOTHER GREAT STORY!!
Another one down
I Enjoy these little mysteries all tied in together and so unlike the other comment, please write more.
Fun series, please keep writting
Really enjoy the series and these mini mystery stories. Enough irons in the fire to keep things interesting.
Thx.
"Oh please"
If you don't like the stories read something else and quit bitching.
I like them, as many other people appear to.
Re: by Anonymous 01/18/15 Oh please
I tried to find your stories to see how it should be done, but alas I failed. Perhaps you're simply waiting 'til you turn five years old and will dazzle us then with your brilliant plots and character development.
I suspect, though, that the more likely case will be that you try to baffle us with bullshit as your comment suggests is your sole, sub-par talent.
@ WifeWatchman, after having your story chapters coming fast and furious, I am habituated and find myself becoming antsy, wondering when I'll get my next mystery fix.
~g
Story line
I like your stories. In this one the verbal abuse on the set gave it away too fast.
Outstanding work !!
I love this series. The procedural parts are realistic to a certain extent and the whodunnit aspect is mind blowing!
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