All Comments on 'Learning Hypnosis Ch. 02'

Very sexy story. Nice job with the technical details of hypnosis. I look forward to new chapters.

wish there was more...

Although you have raced ahead and got both Hotties willingly 'under' within 2 chapters surely there's more to this story mate? I know you wrote it about 3 years ago but hey there's good footage awaiting!

It CAN be done! I have seen it here in Sydney in a private party which got out of control the hypnotist getting two girls to undress each other then waking them up just as they both dived into another (male) guest. Unfortunately only one of them saw the funny side, the other did everything except call the Police! She told everyone at her office, on the beach in the club, etc.

And guess what she blaaaahed so much that - the hypnotist went on every ones party list, the other girl (now my wife) became the most popular girl around our set as she had DONE what many other girls confessed they had always wanted to do.... OH yes and the girl who called foul had to leave town I think!!

All this happened over 30 years ago, - so who knows I might even be able to be a 'father figure' now!

But hey guys & gals do you really believe that young hotties even glance at us 'father figures'??? Get a life!

Anyway great story Red Johnny.

Many thanks with best wishes from Sam (A Male from Manley!!).

I enjoyed this quite a bit. The story is building nicely, and I'd like to see the wife quite smoking too.

Nice little story! Only one small critism:The build-up to the "meat" of the story was a little like time lapse photography. It jumped forward VERY fast.

I still enjoyed reading it a lot!

This was very exciting. You have away with words. Thank you for a wonderful story

Holy God, that story was hot. Must have more.

Bald pussies are a turn off for me. They remind me of a little girls pussy. Give me a BIG FURRY KITTEN to look at and feel. Wish you would have had both so as to make guys like me happy.

Enjoyed this story and hope it continues. thanks

Love the story !!

that there never was more of this story and the characters....I loved where it was and where it was going

thought your stories were well put together very good

hope you continue it soon

maybe little enf or exhib in future looking forward to whats next

I love the idea of hypnosis! I hope you get around to writing more chapters, I'll keep you in my favorites list just in case!

I think your Hypnosis student could be like a Doctor and just have to keep practicing. Maybe for years. What a bases for a series of ever expanding challenges for him, his wife and, the subjects. Good luck in whatever you write.

I like that you spent time developing the story and leaving the graphic sexual content to a minimum. With that being said, I sure would love to read more

REALLY NICELY WRITTEN, WELL PACED AND TIMED. PLEASE FINISH IT OR AT LEAST ADD SOME MORE AT THE SAME HIGH STANDARD.

I am going to fully enjoy this story as it continues to unfold.

The story line is plausible, including how hypnotic suggestions might be framed. (This genre is easily overdone but RedJohnny has wisely avoided taking it over the top.) All the characters are likeable and sweet-sexy, which adds to the story's appeal and also its eroticism. Finally, the fact there's a lot of room for story development and increasingly arousing scenes has us eagerly anticipating the posting of future chapters (hint, hint)...

TBH THIS IS ONE OF MY FAAAAVVVORITE STORIES

Lots of possibility with a dinner with the wife, both girls servicing the couple.

5 stars? I want to give more for wonderful stories like this.

P.S. Nice incest angle.

Wow! That's great! Continue, please!!!

We’ll done, thank you. I look forward to chapter 3. Perhaps even chapters 4 and 5, annual reunions with the ladies, perhaps, after their marriages, even a few impregnations.