I have just discovered your work and I am thoroughly enjoying it! You are fast becoming one of my very favorite authors. You have some brilliantly original story lines and (as one other comment already stated) your command of the spoken word is excellent. As another said, this story deserves to be finished. I sincerely hope that you will consider that at some point in the future.
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Really enjoyed this story
Nice blend of humor, uncertainty, possibility.
Excellant dialogue !!
You've been a story writing machine this last while and the quality remains high. Well done sir!
An excellent start
You handle spoken words well (that's not too common !).
I look forward to seeing more of this sparring match.
Thank You
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Well an intriguing start
No vote at this point. If you fail to finish then the score will revert to the "1" that is reserved for all unfinished works.
Good start, but this really deserves to be finished.
Please, please, please
I have just discovered your work and I am thoroughly enjoying it! You are fast becoming one of my very favorite authors. You have some brilliantly original story lines and (as one other comment already stated) your command of the spoken word is excellent. As another said, this story deserves to be finished. I sincerely hope that you will consider that at some point in the future.
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