I wrote almost all of this a month or so after I submitted the first chapter, but then life got hectic and I didn't have time to finish it. I like this kind of mix between thriller and erotica, so I think I'll revisit David and Naomi sometime in the not too far future...
nice going ... just lovely
carry on .. but this time dont take too much time to post next episode ..... loved it
Thanks
I wrote almost all of this a month or so after I submitted the first chapter, but then life got hectic and I didn't have time to finish it. I like this kind of mix between thriller and erotica, so I think I'll revisit David and Naomi sometime in the not too far future...
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