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The Hard Hit Ch. 02

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by hotnatasha198701/20/15

nice going ... just lovely

carry on .. but this time dont take too much time to post next episode ..... loved it

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by Mr_Owlow01/21/15

Thanks

I wrote almost all of this a month or so after I submitted the first chapter, but then life got hectic and I didn't have time to finish it. I like this kind of mix between thriller and erotica, so I think I'll revisit David and Naomi sometime in the not too far future...

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