...but it was distracting from the heat as you switched from past tense to present to past. Keep it in the past and keep them cumin'! Rye and Ginger
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...but it was distracting from the heat as you switched from past tense to present to past. Keep it in the past and keep them cumin'!
Rye and Ginger
Outstanding!
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Send comments about this story. It was inspired by a nice couple I met on line.
And send comments or ideas. :)
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