There could be a few things to point out regarding grammar, misplaced text, etc, but you nailed the subject right out of the park. Now the tears won't allow me to write very much! Very nice job.
Great/sad story? Hit a little to close to home as i lost my mom to cancer though i can certainly say i did not have that kind of relationship with her.
But it's hard to get turned on knowing the person is dying from cancer. ***
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Anonymous01/28/15
Good story ...
... shame about the dreadful writing!!
Did you do English at school?
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Anonymous01/28/15
Strange Story
I fail to see how sex with a dying woman can be considered erotic. This is just wierd.
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Anonymous01/28/15
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I hope that Part 2 has Sonny Boy fucking his Mom's old crinkly asshole while she lays in the Mortuary! There is nothing better that the stink of a dead person's shit on your cock.
never given 5* for a 1 pg story , but today I just did. dont care about all the mistakes. thats for others that know it all / me, im just trying to type thru pain and disabled hands to say I liked the story that you told. TY for giving me a good read this afternoon/ bill
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Anonymous01/29/15
life can sometimes be a bitch
Shit happens, and then you die. But the mother and son in this fine story make the most of it anyway. I don't understand the savagely negative comments. Here the couple grabs what pleasure they can before the inevitable end. The boy enjoys what lots and lots of sons can only whack off dreaming about. He fucks his own mother. He actually sticks his young cock up the same warm wet hole he came out of and blows his balls up his own mother's cunt. Over and over again. And in the process, he gives his mom the best cums of her life. You have to be a cold-hearted prick to begrudge them their joy.
English
Wow!!
There could be a few things to point out regarding grammar, misplaced text, etc, but you nailed the subject right out of the park. Now the tears won't allow me to write very much! Very nice job.
Great/sad story? Hit a little to close to home as i lost my mom to cancer though i can certainly say i did not have that kind of relationship with her.
It was a good story
But it's hard to get turned on knowing the person is dying from cancer. ***
Good story ...
... shame about the dreadful writing!!
Did you do English at school?
Strange Story
I fail to see how sex with a dying woman can be considered erotic. This is just wierd.
* * *
I hope that Part 2 has Sonny Boy fucking his Mom's old crinkly asshole while she lays in the Mortuary! There is nothing better that the stink of a dead person's shit on your cock.
never given 5* for a 1 pg story , but today I just did. dont care about all the mistakes. thats for others that know it all / me, im just trying to type thru pain and disabled hands to say I liked the story that you told. TY for giving me a good read this afternoon/ bill
life can sometimes be a bitch
Shit happens, and then you die. But the mother and son in this fine story make the most of it anyway. I don't understand the savagely negative comments. Here the couple grabs what pleasure they can before the inevitable end. The boy enjoys what lots and lots of sons can only whack off dreaming about. He fucks his own mother. He actually sticks his young cock up the same warm wet hole he came out of and blows his balls up his own mother's cunt. Over and over again. And in the process, he gives his mom the best cums of her life. You have to be a cold-hearted prick to begrudge them their joy.
Touching
Story, what son would not give his dieing mother anything to make her last days as happy as could be?
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