Ogg, your stories and poems make me smile. This is a delightful little romp. No mention of ages or inches, a fairy tale with no need to suspend disbelief. And as soon as she said her name I was singing "Tripping hither, tripping thither. Nobody know why or whither. We are dainty fairies three" from Iolanthe (that's my memory of the lyrics, could be way off) in the back of my head for the rest of the read.
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Wonderfully romantic with some real magic, thr fact that the magic is not wave of a wand magic but explanable occorances only makes the story better.
Ogg, your stories and poems make me smile. This is a delightful little romp. No mention of ages or inches, a fairy tale with no need to suspend disbelief. And as soon as she said her name I was singing "Tripping hither, tripping thither. Nobody know why or whither. We are dainty fairies three" from Iolanthe (that's my memory of the lyrics, could be way off) in the back of my head for the rest of the read.
Light and Funny
A good easy story without a lot of crap. Brought a smile to my face.
ditto
a delightful fairy tale of tail. Modern Romantic Eroticism without losing the magic. Of two unhappy people discovering a future together.
Sweet and amusing
Perfect Valentine tale, with 'magic' in the air, as enjoyable to read as I'm sure it was to write.
Love love love it!
I loved this story, I enjoyed it from start to finish. Best wishes for the competition.
Nice
I enjoyed your story very much. Especially the little touch a magic.
Magical
A lovelly mixture' a magical romance
I really enjoyed reading.
Thank you.
JR
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Wonderfully romantic with some real magic, thr fact that the magic is not wave of a wand magic but explanable occorances only makes the story better.
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