I think that you did a fantastic job crafting this story, and I have enjoyed reading some of your other submissions.
wish i had a sister when i was growing up.... every one of the scenarios in all your stories... seem to have evolved so naturally... proceeding along in spite of all the mental reservations that come up.... beautifully handled..
hehehe... my favorite story on this site.
It is a wonderful story - quite a departure from the routine thousands of those where fucking begins tastelessly within 3 seconds into the story. Very well written - realistic as well.
I knew that they would eventually fuck. I just didn't know when. My cock was getting harder with each encounter. Great story, great writing skill
Reminds me of experiences of my own. Used to sleep with my older sister as a teenage boy. Although we never got around to fucking I felt her up pretty good. I did fuck my niece for about five or six years though. For some strange reason we never discussed, we stopped doing that three years ago. Go figure.
Magnificent job of drawing the reader in, with a slow and incredibly arousing buildup. I can't wait to read youbadboy's other submissions!
you allowed us to fall into a world of sensual rapture instead of cliche phrases. an amazingly written story... one that seems to speak of truth...?
Fantastic, I have read Literotica for a long time and have been getting sick of the same old same old, but you have excelled with an excellent lead up to a beautiful fulfillment of both parties fantasy. Absolutely brilliantly passionate. The Best
Excellent writing and very realistic. A wonderful narrative that shows how making love can be so intoxicating and compelling.
A mature text, using slow buildup. The minimal use of explicit words make this a literary masterpiece. The slow seduction is a sure indication of a mature adult literature. meant to arouse you slowly and surely. We need more such mature writings. This is "Literature" not "porn".
i have fantized of a relationship with my own sister and this seems to coming straight out my dreams.You may never have had any relations with a family memeber but I do know you wanted to.
This happenned. Every little incident.
the first installment is so hot, so intense, man. i was lost in that dark room with the characters. the sight, the smell together with the groggyness from sleeping must have hit them straight in the head. they couldn't think - let alone reason. all other senses were given top priority now, hey. damn, u r right. the moment u know u will only experiance once or too in my life. oh well, they r young right. i hope i can still have such strong emotion in my older year. no i meant i really wish for that, man. very good writing, indeed.
YOu capture such excelllent detail and readsvery loving betwenn these two siblings; zbsoluterly marvelus.
Very nicely written. A real love story from the heart.
That was an outstanding read. I am an English major and have graded a plethura of papers as an assistant to an AP English professor. Of all that I have graded I have never seen anyone, other than a professional novelist, mingle detail and action together so well . Writing could be a viable carrer choice if you were ever interested; Great work.
You are such an excellent writer! Thank you so much for sharing your stories on-line with us! I am going to go read more of your stuff now!
This is the best piece I have read here. Gradual build up towards climax. This indeed is "literotica", the erotic literature. Excellent work, keep it up. If you write a whole novel too, I will buy it.
It's sure is erotic. It's sure is literature. It's the best piece of literotica I've ever read. Downloaded all stories of this writer just after finishing this one. And have tagged youbadboy to read every story he write from now on.
Loved Sara. Loved her brother. Loved the erotic sensuous way they moved to each other. Loved everything about this story. Whenever want to be warmed up, open this story and read, full or any part of it. Want many many more like this one.
this is an amazing story. the gradual build up to the climax, the tease, the uncertaininty of whether any thing would happen. It gets the blood boiling, never read a more exotic story.
You got it kid. And then.....
I liked the slow development toward the act itself. So much more fulfilling that way. Keep it up!
It is very well written, and holds ones interest. I like the way that it leads up to the final act. I will be looking to read more of your submissions. Thanks!!!
Loved the buildup, nice and steady, one step at a time Very good.
WOW WOW WOW
What a fantastic erotic and very sexy story you are good really really good I loved the slow build up keeps one there reading not knowing if anything would happen or not but brilliant writing well done!!!! looking forward to reading more of your stories thank you so much:)
Totally Amazing. One of the best I have ever read, anywhere. You are truly an excellent writer.
this seems to be a real thing happened to the author.the descriptions tend me to think in that way.if it is purely a work of fiction kudos to the authors imaginative powers.
To my total surprise, my sister-in-law, totally seduced me and the sex was so good and wicked, many years ago. It ended, after a few months, but the memories still linger. She was the aggressor, and it felt so great, just as in your Sara stories. When the passion hits, sometimes it is irrestable.
I loved this story, in my opinion it is one of the best in Literotica. Nice to see a story that builds slowly, the characters remaining tender and concerned throughout instead of the usual 'hmmm...let me think about this for 10 seconds' then WHAM they're fucking like porn stars.
When I was growing up, my family went on one major vacation a year and we always got one room with two double beds. Even when my brother and I were teenagers, we were expected to share a bed while on vacation. When I was 17 and he was 15, we spent two weeks in Hawaii. Although I was average height and weight, by that age I had 36D breasts. One night, I woke up in the middle of the night to find my brother caressing my hard nipple through my nightie. Purely out of reaction, I smacked his hand away and he immediately pretended to be asleep. I fell back to sleep and nothing was ever said about it after that. To this day, I can remember how his fingers felt on my breast, and I regret having knocked his hand away. 18 years later I still fantasize about what could have happened next, and this story fills in the blanks for me in such a wonderful way :).
uhh usuallyi never dream of writing comments but this was was soo good nice job!
great, keep up the good work
I loved it!!! How you worked us into a frenzy. Making us want to read on. It was fantastic, you should put another one out. Awesome!
I can't remember the last time I read such a well developed story with characters that had depth and banter and real emotions not just lust! I don't know what your day job is, but if it isn't the written word, you have definately missed your calling. Fact or fiction, this story had me spellbound.
I LOVE the story, even though the incest is a bit weird for me. I just couldn't stop reading! I was getting so turned on and curious.
Very well DONE!
What a well written story. It really may be one of the best I've read on here. The incest idea is so socially unacceptable and I think that's what makes it so erotic, especially when an author creates characters who acknowledge that it's weird. Great character development. Also, it's kinda weird because my name's Sara and I have long dark hair and I'm in college and I have an older sibling and I've been on a family road trip where the AC died. Strange coincidence, huh?
As a 70yo man with some incest in my background, I must say your tale kept me spellbound all through. I especially enjoyed the tantalizing build-up to the final climax (pun intended!). Your way with words is a particular delight.
Your story is like a stolen memory of my own. Very erotic, slow, delicious, realistic build-up.
I have enjoyed reading your other submissions and think that you do a terrific job. The slow build up and the gentle and loving characters and there was no way I could stop reading.
you rock, great action, details everything you rock
Your writing was incredible, so slow and sensual and utterly spellbinding! Very well done!
Wonderful story. Well written and sexy. Could not get enough, read it over and over.
One of the best stories and now one of my favorites. Very well written and exceptionally sexy, erotic. Very arousing and I could not help but get hard. I had to relieve myself by stories end. Thanks for a great story.
so very sweet and satisfying. the incest bit added a whole dimension that I didnt think I'd enjoy, having a brother myself, but wound up loving.
I just couldn't help slowly masturbating to a mind shattering climax while reading the story...
Excellent story. I loved the slow build up and then it just gets wild and crazy. Amazing detail.
no comparision best i have ever read
great detail and build up
I really enjoy your story it was interesting. But you have me on my seat waiting when he was going to get into her sweet pants. suzie
.....however when you turn mean and selfish, you are not so good. Please be nice. The sex and love is better then.
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