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by Drakon6601/23/15

Nice story

Could have used some more detail of the alien anatomy but otherwise very well written.

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by Anonymous01/27/15

Nice

Ever hear of Star Wars? Google an artist called Shaggy Blue... that should satisfy your descriptive needs. Twi'lek. Good story, reminded me of an RPG I played in once.

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