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well. the guy says get an editor. Hell, he got the story for free. Does he want his cake and to eat it, too
He could at least complain in a nice way
its fine guys.
I'm on here to write and I thought I would get fulfilment from this site. Finding people favouriting my work and enjoying it is all I could have asked for. But I did not get the fulfilling feeling I hoped for. So I may still write,.but not contribute as much as I hoped to. I'm not sure how much more I will write, but the only thing was the
People emailing me ideas and such. I Can get my ideas from friends and such. Not strangers emailing me dirty stuff. I hope I can bring as much joy as I can with my next piece.
Thank you to all the people who liked my work
-Typhokinetic
Young man, don't be disappointed.
In fact a lot of LIT critcs forget all their good habits, when it comes to comments.
And what has your idiot critic done to be such a dickhead??
Liked your story, it reminded of my young lad days. There were four families with boys close to same age in my neighborhood, and we all went in and out of each other's homes like we lived there and nobody's Mom thought there was any problem with it. A few times the other's Mom's would be in open housecoat (or slip) walking around when I walked in and hurriedly scurry to bedroom. But the sight was sweet to a young adolescent wanting to see what a naked woman looked like.
Also once I went visit kids of one of my male school teacher's next door and the kids wanted me to come inside to their room. Their Dad (my jr high asst principal and science teacher) was naked in kitchen cooking breakfast at the stove, and none of the kids, or he thought a thing about it. He was still nude in kitchen when I left to go home 15 min or so later. What an education he gave me, GRIN
Don't worry, keep writing.
Nobody's perfect, so don't worry about people who say you are.
I liked your story, although the seduction scene was a lot shorter and quicker than I'd like in a story. I think perhaps it was as short and quick as it is in real life.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.
Just remember that, if somebody doesn't like what you do, it's OK. They have no taste, no class.
too short but fantastic
It was a bit short for me but regardless i liked it and want more
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