More Than Meets the Eye Pt. 01

Your Story

So far, so good.

careless mistakes

haha, I noticed several easy careless mistakes I made while writing this. Damn I was tired, and like I said I was discouraged because my original submission got deleted because my web-browser crashed as I was almost done with it...

I submitted yet a third revision which they're reviewing and should be up in a few days. Even my second revision missed a lot of junk. Although for those reading this for the first time, the first version was even worse than the second. The third revision reads much smoother than the second, and I'd honestly like to improve it even further.