Weres the sequel? i was just about to blow my load and all the sudden it ends? Weres the sequel? Otherwise a very descriptive and sensual story.
I need more of this. Hot but needs a better ending!!
I was expecting more than that. It was getting exciting than all of a sudden it endded you should definatly write more about this.
thats it
finish it!!
ohh that was just mean
Treat them mean, keep them keen, We'll be back for more.
yet another turkey writer that leaves the readers hanging
Crap
poor background and character development and no end equals a waste of time that NEVER SHOULD HAVE BEEN POSTED.
Good stuff plz continue it left me hard
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weres the sequel?
Weres the sequel?
i was just about to blow my load and all the sudden it ends? Weres the sequel?
Otherwise a very descriptive and sensual story.
More!!
I need more of this. Hot but needs a better ending!!
that it?
I was expecting more than that. It was getting exciting than all of a sudden it endded you should definatly write more about this.
what
thats it
more?
finish it!!
.........
ohh that was just mean
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Treat them mean, keep them keen, We'll be back for more.
turkey
yet another turkey writer that leaves the readers hanging
Fucking rubbish
Crap
another waste of time
poor background and character development and no end equals a waste of time that NEVER SHOULD HAVE BEEN POSTED.
Ignore that idiot I want a sequel
Good stuff plz continue it left me hard
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