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Neighborhood Cougars

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by tnadnuder04/22/15

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I usually like to see when you've posted a new story. However, this is the second of yours I've read today, & also the second I didn't finish.

I do not consider myself a writer of erotic stories at all, but I have written fiction for over a decade & been in contact with publishers about that. You seem to have the problem I assume many do that write the volume for this site you appear to: Quantity, but not quality. Spelling seems decent, but grammar & punctuation are sorely mistaken.

Need an editor? Reply to me, & I will take the job.

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