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by shadowkt1701/23/15

keep it going!

Good first attempt I thought, although a little short. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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by Anonymous01/23/15

need more

The story so far is good but is puzzling without some backstory...for instance, why is Sarah in Hell? She was the one that was murdered and all I saw of her character was a tendency to swear about the boss and some anger issues :) I really hope that isn't enough to head for Hell or I am in trouble!

I would definitely read further chapters

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