Wanting Him Ch. 02

So short...

I'm enjoying your story. Wishing for some length though! :)

I was not feeling this chapter as much....

Ashton seems so COLD. It's like the story took a turn...
This chapter seems rushed also.

what's with Ashton???

He's being a heartless ass. That sweet boy doesn't need a hookup. He'll fall for the heartless prick and then what? He deserves love. Mr. I just wanna fuck should turn him down and tell him to wait for the right guy. Even man whores can have honor and a conscience, so why doesn't he?

And what's up with the ambush? He needed support and his friend called Ashton up to make him feel worse and then proposition him with empty, degrading, you're-not-worth-it sex. Just yuck. I'm soooo not liking Ashton right now.

Why is Ashton so different than the guy he met in the club. At the club and even the party he was all attentive and caring.. it seemed like others in the club perceived him that way too. Now he's this rakish, twat who just wants hook-ups. That is fine, but i just don't see you being consistent in the way you developed him from the beginning to now. Seems like two different characters from ch.1 to ch. 2

Ugh, I wish it was longer. More please!

Shut Up!!1

Omg tell me he did not pass out lmbo Ashton is going to think it's cute or he is going to be annoyed by him lol can't wait!!!

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post more please this is such a good seris