All Comments on 'Meeting Mom Online'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Fun Premise, but

The role play idea was a great angle, and the exchanges were damn hot. It was kind of easy to see where it was going, but that's true of a lot of stories here and they are all still a fun ride.

Loved the ending and the entire story. My only point has nothing really to do with the story, but more something for your benefit. The description and even your opening note made it seem as if the story might only be role playing and not real mother/son which of course it is.

Not sure if that will hurt the story as far as not getting as many reads and even some flying off the handle bombing. Best of luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
3rd

Hoping I could help him out! Generally not into incest. Story line very hot

Ivo_ShandorIvo_Shandorabout 9 years ago
Bravo

Wonderful story.

Just wonderful i hope you consider another chapter even after the contest. I feel like there story should continue.

Great job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
The kids a bit slow witted.

I enjoyed your story, but she's all dressed in Purple and the kid still wasn't figuring it out. Duh! And this, after he identified her giggle and had other clues that didn't register. Lucky he had the body, cause the kids missing a card or two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great story and so very hot

I love this story it may turn out to be one of my favorites thanks for the info on Always wanted to I wonder what had happen to him; your story's are just as terrific a new fan tenbears43 keep on trucking; i'm sorry nothing bigger than a five good luck love your work!

ProfQ1955ProfQ1955about 9 years ago
Hot Damn

That is one Hell of an Incest story. Bravo on it.

jzahniserjzahniserabout 9 years ago
Wonderful

Although I am not a fan of incest, the length of the story and the coherency of the storyline had me enthralled! Great job!

YamiBoyYamiBoyabout 9 years ago
^__^

Absolutely fantastic story. I've loved it to pieces! Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. 5 stars vote because the site doesn't allow to award it any more. ^__^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
about alwayswantedtodo.

what happen to alwayswantedtodo. he is a gr8 storywriter. there is nobody like him in any segment. i simply enjoy his story. how can i know about him. i m admirer of his imagination. i will pray for him. he will be good in notym. and plz tell him i m waiting for his stories on board. Plz God mak him healthy again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Alwayswantedto

Shame to hear about Alwayswantedto. Great story teller. Here's hoping he gets better and returns to us all. Great story by the way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Bravo

Well done as always. You remind us all that inside every mommy beats the heart of a dirty girl.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerabout 9 years ago
GREAT STORY

Wish you luck with the contest. I think I spotted a need for more proofing around the last couple page breaks, but my internet is so slow I didn't go back to double check.

Thanks for the update on Alwayswantedto. I think he ruled this category, and it was his story, "The Rambler," that inspired me to submit my first story, "Grammy's Boy." Since he removed his bio, making it impossible for us to contact him, I hope you will pass our concern on to him. Meanwhile, may God bless and keep him and if its His will, return him to health. Thanks and good luck again.--dreamer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Enjoyable

Immensely enjoyed the story. I admit I would have enjoyed Tommy enjoying some cream pie after enjoying Debra's pussy. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

for Rebecca to say it's disrespectful for sean to call her by her real name when there alone after everything that happened it's ruins the mood, it's stupid, she just had anal sex with sean and all the hot fucking and teasing they had and she says don't say my real name. It's a great story all the way. it just pissed me off when she said that to sean.

drtybabygurldrtybabygurlabout 9 years ago
loved it!!!

One of the best I've read!!! Hope you do another chapter!! Good luck with the contest..wish I could have given you more than 5 stars!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wow

thank you for your efforts. great story. and thank you for the update on alwayswantedto. he has proven a good mentor for you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
fucking A+++++

Man that was the hottest thing I read. Very well done. I just wish it would never end.

writerjabwriterjababout 9 years ago
Pretty darn good ... but ...

The characters did a LOT of whimpering. I like to see variety instead of leaning on one word.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Damn that was awesome!

I know it was a Valentine's Day contest entry but what are the chances of more chapters being added? I'm sure i'm not alone in asking that haha. Awesome story, loved all the nasty parts and the vivid details. Bravo

drozguldrozgulabout 9 years ago
writerjab and my edge

If whimpering is what they do, changing the word changes what they do. I, for one, DRANK in this story, and edged myself to one if the most serene and pleasant orgasms I've ever had when not with someone. I STILL don't know what ever excited this taboo in me, but I love it BECAUSE of writers like you. I struggle with some writing of my own because of a lack of acceptance in the incest category. I want my wife to read it and not judge me, and the eroticism of this and pieces like it lead me to believe I could do it without worry someday. Maybe I should let my mom read it first. ;)

Keoni1791Keoni1791about 9 years ago
Best wishes and sincere thanks

Thank you for your update on alwayswantedto. His stories were some of the first, and best, things that I read here on Literotica. If you're willing, please convey my best wishes and thanks to him for all that he has done.

Thank you for a wonderful and erotic read!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 9 years ago

If I could, I'd give this ten stars!! I've read it twice so far and I came each time before I got to the end. Looks like I'm just going to have to read it a few more times to see how it turns out. :-) Another true masterpiece, LC!

Too bad about Alwayswantedto. I always liked his stories. They were very well written and so fucking hot. I think my favorite was "Liveaboard fun". I think that was the title. It was the one about the people on the scuba diving boat for the week. Awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Hooow-we! Smoking hot. The long slow build up to great sex scene - wow!!!.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 9 years ago
Again a great story.

I love your work, and I always will.

Thank you for the Alwayswantedto info.

I did try contacting him once but no reply. Please if you can, tell him I miss him.

Alaska84Alaska84about 9 years ago

Very good. Loved it. Thanks for sharing your story with us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
a great story--but that's just par for the course with the irreplaceable Mr. L.

20 year old Sean's had big hard on for his mother, Rebecca, for years. He goes so far as to role-play online with an older lady, calling her "mom" as she calls him her "son." Boy, is this kid in for a surprise. When the masks come off, it turns out that his mother's even wilder for her big strapping boy than he is for his lovely voluptuous mom. Like lots of mothers, Rebecca has a very special affection for her male child's penis. She's delighted by the changes Sean's penis goes through, from soft and just hanging down over his balls, to half-hard and getting ready for action, to a full-fledged throbbing rock-hard mommy-pleaser. Rebecca's just as excited by what her boy's got waiting for her in his hot young balls. Lucky for her, at his age Sean's a nonstop semen producing machine. Those young balls of his never quit, and mom just cannot get enough of his creamy semen. She wants it splattered all over her tits and body and sprayed up every hole she's got, over and over again. She wears Sean out, the poor kid's running out of sperm. But, hey, "he's young and hung and full of cum," so mom never has to go without. I'm glad that Sean and Rebecca will be together for years and that they'll live by the motto, "a boy's penis and his mother's vagina--made for each other."

lone_wolf716lone_wolf716about 9 years ago
5 Star Classic

Another great story from the mind of lovecraft68. A very good read, enjoyed the role play between Mom and Son.

couple4fun4080couple4fun4080about 9 years ago
great story

I always enjoy reading your stories and alwayswantedto's also. I will miss his stories as well. A cousin and I did a little fooling around when we were very young. It was more of an exploring kind of thing and growing up I never wanted or fantasized about any relatives ( I lived next door to a girls home) but for some reason, being older, I enjoy reading incest stories...mom and son or siblings, not daddy, daughter. but anyways....love reading your stories and I wish your friend and a great erotica author alwayswantedto a speedy recovery. Couple4fun4080

vic22333vic22333about 9 years ago
Awesome

I love your stories. You are very talented. I love the way u carry the love making scene. Keep it up.

ender2k2kender2k2kabout 9 years ago
Another great story.

I love the longer stories and this was very well written. I'd like to add to the requests that you pass along best wishes to alwayswantedto. It is so sad to see an author remove such fine works from this site. I also hope that you wife has a speedy and complete recovery. Good luck with the contest!

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXabout 9 years ago
This story is sweet and sexy at once.

I love how the mother is submissive one minute, dominant the next. A real give and take in the relationship, Also, how she knew all along. Such a mother with the whole eyes in the back of her head. Of course she knew about Sean being Tommy....lol. Very cool Valentine's tale...or is that tail? Rated it a 5. Well done, Lovecraft.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good read

looking forward 2 more of your work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sorry to hear about alwayswantedto, but are you up to a challenge?

You are a great(and gifted) writer, but reading another series of yours(Milf Tails) i think your stories lack a bit of emotional conflicts.Your characters are always on the fun side, and (most)of your moms are too good to be true.Could you write a story about a bully taking a mom and the son rescue her at the end(or in the end she chooses the son)?Another plot:Widow mom hooks with bestfriend son, son discover and the conflict begins.(Anon from Spain)

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
one of the best in this genre

I loved her questions, and Tommy's answers.

makes you stop and think what your own reaction would be if role playing became reality.

and that dear author, is the true indication of a well written story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Boring old crap.....

....just like your Milf series.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
well written

The story was so well written I felt like I was there.I could actually picture myself there watching.wow.

jott50jott50about 9 years ago
GOOD JOB!!!

LOVED IT!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
MAGNIFICENT WRITING

My lead say's it all. You did a very fine piece of fiction here!

MSTarotMSTarotabout 9 years ago
Beautifully done...

...as always. Nice story line, hot idea, and very nice ending. Excellent writing as always from you, LC.

critique: Only saw one thing that stood out to me and that was minor. I would think that after all the time they had been roleplaying together online, when they finally came together, and he realized it was her. Talking, Dialog between them would have been unneeded.

It would have been raw, fast and without need for words, at least that first time. Now after that playful banter works. Works beautifully, but lust would have ruled that first encounter...not words.

MST

sexzensexzenabout 9 years ago
good job

very satisfying indeed

AMoveableBeastAMoveableBeastabout 9 years ago

You've got the skills, LC. There's simply nothing else to it. You will always put up consistently excellent work. This is no exception.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Best story by far

Amazing story, the best I have every had the pleasure of reading, this is such a taboo, for me I have had these fanastys for many years, but would never have the courage to say anything.

HookmeistrHookmeistrabout 9 years ago
AllwaysWantedTo

Before I read your story, I wanted to address your mention of this great author. I was a fan of his and very much enjoyed his stories/skill. I wish I had had an opportunity to have dialogue with him and to have saved his stories for offline reading (for those I hadn't already read). I would so love to finish reading all of his stories. If you have an opportunity to pass this along to him, please do. I would greatly appreciate it. Also, a big thank you to YOU for sharing this with all of us to let us know. He will be greatly missed by many, I'm quite sure. I will keep him in my thoughts and wish him well. Now, I'm off to read your story....or will do so soon. Again, thank you. You're one of my favorites as well.

JKendallDaneJKendallDaneabout 9 years ago
Is "WOW!" being too brief?

You just whip them out so easily and so damn good too. This story is just more validation of your talent at turning a phrase, creating some of the best dialog on the site, and stitching a tale together that leaves your fans wanting a cigarette even if they don't smoke.

Great job and best wishes with the contest. Adding another big blue "W" to your portfolio would be well deserved payment for this creation. I am sure adding five stars to help get you there.

(you did do one thing wrong though...I now have my Muse whispering in my ear about a plot bunny for the gay male category. Like I have any empty cages to stuff the furry thing in! Thanks loads. LOL)

ZaneDCameronZaneDCameronabout 9 years ago
More?

I really enjoyed reading this :) You're so detailed and your writing skills are amazing, I really hope we see more of these two in the future

arrowglassarrowglassabout 9 years ago
REALLY HOT STORY!!!!!!!!

Very wellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow

This is literally the best story i have ever read.

firebazz7firebazz7about 9 years ago
wow

This is a great story. A job well done.

vladdracul85vladdracul85about 9 years ago
amazing

please continue the story with more chapters it was amazing

hawaiirootshawaiirootsover 8 years ago
I loved it!

What's hotter, "Rebecca suck my cock; or mom get on your knees and suck your son's dick?"

This is exactly how i feel when i read stories where the son starts calling the mom by her first name. I'm like NO, it's hotter to call her MOM. I also really love when stories include the mom still acting like a mom, even after being fucked every which way by her son. That is really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love it!

OMG.. i came so many times and I had to stop reading so that I could touch myself. Best by far.. Love your work

Lyfdonaka9InchLyfdonaka9Inchover 8 years ago
had a masturbation marathon

Nice story...loved it.I had a masturbation marathon while reading it and it made me hard from the first page till the last page, don't know how many times I came...my cock is still hard and I'm gonna go for another round.This is my all time favourite....keep up the good work, would love to see more of your work....Oh how I wish I was Sean...

woodseaveswoodseavesover 8 years ago
the hottest yet

Wow! That was an amazing read. A brilliant, exciting theme to have mom and son sexing on an internet site with son's dual dezires about having wild sex and making love with a cougar and fantasising it was his own mom he wanted to be with, but not daring to acknowledge and not knowing. All that initial dialogue set the stage so well, and itself very hot. I love the dirty talk by mom, and the action was tremendous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Win

I had a friend and she used to tell me a lot of stuff We both would trust each other about what we said..She black and I'M white.So one day we were sitting in her living room and her son came out of his room.So he asked her what time is dinner She said seven.So he went back to his room.I said that your son she said ya I said what's up with him.Doesn't be have a girlfriend.She said no.He sits around all day and plays video games.I said has he ever been with a girl.she said no.She said you ever do anything real kinky.I said yes.She said what.I used to lick the crotch of my Moms panties I could taste her pussy.She said that's cool.She said one night she was feeling real lonely and she said ever since her old man moved out that she hasn't been with any one.She said that she walked in her son's room and he was sleeping.So she was looking at him then she removed the sheets off him.She said when she seen him naked.She looked at his cock and she said it looked so big and beautiful.I said what happened.She said that she lean down and started stroking him off then she said that she started sucking his cock I said what did he do He said to keep sucking me I like mom.So I sucked him off twice that night and I started doing it for him three times a week I said no shit.I said that pretty cool.Then I said is his cock nice and black She said yes.Then I said is big She said yes why.She said you want to suck his co k.I said if you would let me.I said I always wanted to suck his black cock Sho said you suck other men Ya I been sucking off guys for years She said you want to suck his cock now I said Yes She said That she would love to see me sucking it and I wants to do it with me I said ok So we went in his room and me and her sucked his cock really good .Then I asked her if he wants to fuck me and she said he will.So he fucked my ass real good and he cummed ime twice I told her that I loved it and let's do it again She said we will.I said your a good Mom.

bob3641223bob3641223over 8 years ago
one of the best

i've read, loved it I've always had the same desire for mine, and sorry to hear about your wife hope she is ine now.

kaidmankaidmanabout 8 years ago
great story

I am stunned I didn't know that writer left here I love the stories written by that master

TSreaderTSreaderabout 8 years ago
Wow!

A really hot story! Well done! Thank you!

HankWilliams1956HankWilliams1956almost 8 years ago
If only that would work

I would have loved to been able to have done the same with my mom or sister. Very hot story indeed. I so loved the story, even as I thought it may be his mom, and he had no clue at all. Thank you for sharing it with us. Reading your note at the end of the story I seen it is the second time I saw where your wife had some serious health issues and I'm so glad she pulled through and hope she is still doing good still yet. And, you are so write about life being short. I tell my wife how much I love her, and show her, my love for her sevral times a day. Again thank you for such a story.

JAUNTYOLDONEJAUNTYOLDONEalmost 8 years ago
5*s !!!

5*s Plus 4 on the Budweiser Scale !!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very nice story

Less than 5 stars would be unfair. Really nice story from beginning to the end. To the writer. Keep up the good work.

DonnaEcupDonnaEcupalmost 8 years ago
Truly taboo.

What can I say OMG what an incrediblily sexually stimulating fantasy. As a open minded woman and loving mother I can say this could never happen but you captured the possibility with arrousingly accurate description. Wonderful. Sensuous. Xoxoxoxoxox.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

What a great story, you should try to continue it, with Sean getting mom pregnant

curiousboy40curiousboy40over 7 years ago
wish there was more

make more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
mother/son

wonderful, loving, exceptional, unorthodox. I am anxiously awaiting meeting Mom on Line 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Hmmm

I've noticed in many of your stories you write a positive answer to a question as "Hmm-mm". That's ass backwards. It should be "Mm hmm", which is one of the normal positive responses to a question.

It also appears, from many of the mistakes you make in your writing that you never go back over what you've written and correct the mistakes. And they are numerous and many are very distracting while trying to decipher what the hell you're trying to say.

Damn! I'm seventy six years old and don't have as much trouble with what I write.

The old guy

HornyinDeHornyinDealmost 7 years ago
Hot dream many have

Another hot mom/son story by Lovecraft. All your stories are hot, love the premise. If only my ..... is what I think when reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love the story

I. Love your story you truly get the dynamic of a mother and son relationship . A son that will do anything to please his mother and a mother who loves her son with all her heart .

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wonderful

I can't remember my username to sign n and save this story, lol! But this is probably the best story of a mother and her own son, and trust me I've read a lot of them!!! I just wish I could share my love with my mother like this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
wow

WOW. Thats all I can say what a grest story keep up the grat work.

djsmurf6969djsmurf6969almost 6 years ago

That was awesome! Had my cock rock hard reading this story! Wish that was my mom!

ejherbieejherbieover 5 years ago
So fucking hot

I’ve read a lot of great stories on this fantastic site. But this one was so crazy good it reaches a new level for me. Thank you for your great work.

Gremlin078Gremlin078almost 5 years ago
Wonderful

Read this story before, when I was new to the site and wasn’t conversant with scoring. Went back and read it again. 5 stars ⭐️

FluidswallowerFluidswallowerover 4 years ago
Whew!!!

Words fail me!!!!

JLR6486JLR6486over 3 years ago

I love it!!!!

Wish there was a sequel where she’s pregnant or had another baby or two for Sean to play with...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
O my god

It is so beutiful a story. I think I ove mommy,more of the same please. Love JOHN. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The best

The best written story I've read on this site so far!!!!

IncAddictIncAddictover 3 years ago

So very good! 5 stars from me. I wouldn't say this is the best story on this site, because for me Spellbound will always be the best!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

Another well written, logically developed story. Not up to the standard (character development) of The Return of Molly Minx but still an excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

english/grammar way above that of most north american authors on lit.

story line unusual, but interesting.

however, i gave it only three stars...why? very formulaic...a cliche every three words on every line...

why do i read this stuff??...

there are really good authors out there...just not on lit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved it from the Beginning, Thanks. Peter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful Sensuous Story, Most Young Boys would Hope For. Peter.

totostorytotostoryover 2 years ago

lovecraft68 , I don`t know if you reads comments or not, however I should say this, first the story buildup, sex scenes, dialogues/ dirty talk all are the best as always, BTW I`d read a lot of Alwayswantedto stories and it is good but honestly IMO you`re better because you put more dialogues/ dirty talk more than him also you makes a detailed sex scenes witch is the final prize for the slow burn and the sexual tension, if I`ve one critic for your works it must be that I fell sometimes the male is child not even teenager 18 or more because of his reactions and replies like the Japanese hentia it more comic reactions not a grown up male reaction, I hope you don`t take my words as offence, I am really a huge fan of your works, and always looking for your updates.

bob3641223bob3641223over 1 year ago

I enjoyed it, it was hot, love them staying together as a couple permanent

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Again a very well written charater of the mom, but a weak son. He didn't lead in the bed. Didn't take her raw and rough as she desired. He just lay thete as a didlo and followed instructions.

Do you base the son in your writings on those Japanese mom son pornos?

Would still give it a 4 for the nice and slow buildup.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You should definately do a follow up story say, 2 to 3 years later. Rebecca surprises Sean on the anniversary of when they consumated their love for one another, she became pregnant with his child, their love child. He didn't know it, but deep down, he wanted to have a family with her, same as she did with him.

ejherbieejherbie12 months ago

This is one of those stories you read and are amazed how good it is. Thanks to lovecraft68 will now continue on to his other stories and hopefully they will live up to the quality of this amazing work

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I really enjoyed your story. I look forward to reading all of your stories in the future. Thanks

4chuckssite4chuckssite6 months ago

Enjoyed the buildup even though it was obvious that mom and son were conversing with one another. But even though I enjoy sex, I got bored with your attempt, largely successful, to have them perform nearly all the sex possible in every manner available. Almost wish I had tried to be more loving to my own mother.

buster1305buster13056 months ago

loved the story. Very well written and just enough of a tease.

TabooMom30TabooMom302 months ago

Mmm, I loved your story. Reading incestuous mom/son stories takes me to another place, at least temporarily.

I have a very strong sexual attraction toward my son, which I dont act on. Im not a writer, per se'.

So, I enjoy pretnding Im the mom in the story, etc. I have a few toys, all named after my son also. For me, its quite theraputic and safe.

Please keep writing your hot stories, only to help Sexual Devient MILF's like myself, get through the day.

Muwah

wwaldripwwaldrip17 days ago

Great story and excellent sex scenes very hot loved them.

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