"Will You Be My Valetine Day Date?"

Grabbing Tissues

This story really brought up a lot of emotions for me. I cried and had to keep stopping to wipe and blow my nose! You have a talent for creating a very believable scene and very believable characters as well. Great story with food for thought added in. Wonderful!!

MastersWench

Very well written. Thank you.

Tried to vote, but the stupid 5 would not light up. Sorry.

You can paint the most realistic picture SJP!

unless someone has been homeless, very difficult to understand the hopelessness of the situation. You help us glimpse into that world. thanks for what you do, it is one of a kind!!

Extremely well portrayed

Gives you the feeling that you are seeing the world through her eyes. I kept rooting for a happy ending LOL, but according to this evaluation, if you go down the dogs will eat you.
Not like many other stories about people down on their luck that we have on here!

thank you susan

love how you can make even a homeless person into a literotica piece. maybe not a winner but a masterful story none the less.

2015 is ....

a whole world better, I believe it must surely be that way. Somehow or other you still find time to share, and your following, of which I'm one, wish our best to you because we care sincerely. Happy Valentine's Day, Susan
your bud,
W

Very good

Finally back to reading your stories. They all have a pathos and and underlying sadness that bothers my conscious.