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Not Passing Go! Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by MitchFraell01/30/15

Like it. Keep on writing, there's still a way to go.

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by tazz31701/30/15

NOW TO ROUND UP HIS BAND OF MERRY MEN

and its bulls eyes for all..TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous02/07/15

Well The Merry Men seem to have fallen off the trolley

And gotten lost in the woods. In an attempt to be clever you're "writing" is mucking up the story old sod. This weak attempt at story telling is going nowhere fast.

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