Not Passing Go! Ch. 04

NOW ITS TIME FOR LITTLE JOHN

to clean up the forest, TK U MLJ LV NV

And so they sailed off into the sunset to live happily ever after? No?

The sun hasn't set yet

"Staff" Dan still seeks his old bank heist pals, and in the next episode (half-written) he goes back to school. I have three more stories in mind for this character, so I will return to him from time to time. Several other story projects on the go which are pressing more urgently.

So Dan is SO clever as to take care of his dumb wife?

And his "not" kids. But he has still done 10 years in jail and if I count correctly he's probably in his late forties or early fifties and still planning "black ops"? With the help of his "mates"? How is he paying for all this? And why are all of his old friends all out of work with nothing else to do but kill people for him? He's beginning to sound like a mob boss. But those guys are usually smart enough to stay out of jail. You need to wrap this up before it really gets silly.