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Wooded Glen Fantasy

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by Anonymous10/20/07

I liked it

Great story, very romantic. I have one suggestion though. The best part was all mushed into a single, huge block of text. Breaking your action into smaller paragraphs makes it a lot easier to read. However the content was right on the money, so I gave it a 5 and I urge you to continue writing. :D

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