Would have preferred a little more development of all characters. I didn't feel like I really got to know them. Thought the ribbons and gifts were a bit unnecessary. And really, a 19 year old male virgin? All that being said this was a very hot story, if you post additional chapters I'll sure read them. Some of your other stories sound rather intriguing, I'll for sure check them out. Thanks for sharing.
The idea of the extra, little gifts is based in a real event and so it feels very real to me.
I have background for the 3 main chars and a little for Betty, but didn't want to include too much in this tale. If you noticed, I wrote it as Gail, the mom, and I wanted her to exhibit a breathless anticipation to 'prank' her husband, not be bogged down by too much expo. I will include a little more when Dawn arrives for her sexucation!
We are 19 yo twins and last Valentines Day our boyfriends said they had a surprise for us. Most everyone in our close knit nudist group knew that we lost our virginity to our dad's , just as other girls had to their dad's. Even some of the boys were cherry-less thanks to their moms. But to our surprise, when we went our to our boyfriends house for lunch, both boys and their respective fathers were planning a DP on their moms. The role my sister and I were to play was simple: after the four guys shot their cum we were to suck their cocks clean, two from pussies and two from assholes. The guys sisters were to eat out their moms cunts and assholes, but not THEIR moms; the other guys' moms. At first it sounded gross, but once the action began, we couldn't wait until our roles began.before the festivities were over, my sister and I were treated to cock ourselves - wherever we wanted it. We look forward to next month and Valentines Day again.
After a day a a half in limbo, this story is back. I had to 'XXXXX' out some objectionable bits, but I don't think it hurt the story. Any comments on that?
English
speechless
Simply amazing.
The writer said it spanned a few categories, it did and it was HOT
great story
A sequel is required
5 stars, but barely
Would have preferred a little more development of all characters. I didn't feel like I really got to know them. Thought the ribbons and gifts were a bit unnecessary. And really, a 19 year old male virgin? All that being said this was a very hot story, if you post additional chapters I'll sure read them. Some of your other stories sound rather intriguing, I'll for sure check them out. Thanks for sharing.
Regards, max052
Thanks to all - but the hater....
The idea of the extra, little gifts is based in a real event and so it feels very real to me.
I have background for the 3 main chars and a little for Betty, but didn't want to include too much in this tale. If you noticed, I wrote it as Gail, the mom, and I wanted her to exhibit a breathless anticipation to 'prank' her husband, not be bogged down by too much expo. I will include a little more when Dawn arrives for her sexucation!
We can relate to this
We are 19 yo twins and last Valentines Day our boyfriends said they had a surprise for us. Most everyone in our close knit nudist group knew that we lost our virginity to our dad's , just as other girls had to their dad's. Even some of the boys were cherry-less thanks to their moms. But to our surprise, when we went our to our boyfriends house for lunch, both boys and their respective fathers were planning a DP on their moms. The role my sister and I were to play was simple: after the four guys shot their cum we were to suck their cocks clean, two from pussies and two from assholes. The guys sisters were to eat out their moms cunts and assholes, but not THEIR moms; the other guys' moms. At first it sounded gross, but once the action began, we couldn't wait until our roles began.before the festivities were over, my sister and I were treated to cock ourselves - wherever we wanted it. We look forward to next month and Valentines Day again.
It's baaaaaaaaack !
After a day a a half in limbo, this story is back. I had to 'XXXXX' out some objectionable bits, but I don't think it hurt the story. Any comments on that?
excellent
Kept cock hard. LOOKING FORWARD TO ADDING HIUS GIRL FRIEND
Too clinical
Is there anything more erotic than fun HIV talk and clinical anus discussions? Plus I didnt buy the baby talking, virginal son.
Medical author.
Medically inclined author. Nice special care for health and hygiene. Refreshing naughtiness. I like.
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