by cherrychocolate
Very well written story, and there is a very sexy quality about the main character of the story.
I like the tone of the piece. The lack of quoted dialog really contributed to the dream like feeling.
Got me horny as hell. Extremely well written. Shared a girl with a frat bro once. Hot scene.
You write some hot stuff!! Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to future submissions from you.
Beautifully written, skilfully depicted, exquisitely imagined. . What erotic writing ought to be - five stars