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Beat Off a Different Circadian Drum

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by greenmountaineer01/25/15

This is a remarkable poem, Neo. I said so in PF&D, and it's worth saying so here.

I thought that you contrasted the sensory images to effectively add to the tension.

Just to provoke some thinking about any future edit: I think you gave enough inferences throughout the poem (including the villainous "him" BTW) I'm not sure you needed to mention the Rx in S3. That said, I have a history as a gatekeeper and helper in these matters, so what was apparent to me may not be for some others.

Great poem.

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