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Taken Home For The Night

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/25/15

I couldn't get past the first couple lines full of errors and missing words.

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by Anonymous01/27/15

Wow

I normally don't do negative comments but this one had so many glaring issues right from the start it was jarring. I stopped reading after the first minute.

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by Anonymous01/31/15

One Word...

...well, you'd probably think it was one word.

Un-fucking-readable!

(And just to void any confusion, the above is NOT a compliment)

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