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Very nice. Would love a follow up with some double penetration!
wow
I am sad. Your worse story to date. Maybe it's the whole gang rape thing but it was not a great story..irreversible horrible..I don't think I will read your work anymore because of this installment...
Not worth the time to even write this comment.
Inescapably horrid. I searched the reluctance topic. I knew what I was getting into. It was just horribly written, not erotic or attractive at all or in any way. I hated the main character so much I didn't want her to feel any pleasure, and I hated the writing so much I just had to stop reading.
Not THAT bad!! LOL
Nowhere near as bad as these cretins claim...different yes, but still in your usual sparse style....I laugh at these literary critics who find themselves on Literotica with delusions of grandeur!! LOL Keep up the very satisfying writing!!
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