Thanks for taking the time to write your story. It's a hot story line and I hope you continue on, despite the many trolls on this site.
but your introduction of the bi stuff at the end was a bit disconcerting. Dont think I would react so nonchalantly as the main character. Also, too short for me, would've enjoyed another page or two. Looking fwd to seeing how you develop this.
Maybe a little rushed, but hot, nonetheless.
Congratulations!
Should that be "Glen" instead of "Alan" in the last para?
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Thank you!
Thanks for taking the time to write your story. It's a hot story line and I hope you continue on, despite the many trolls on this site.
Decent start for an always interesting premise
but your introduction of the bi stuff at the end was a bit disconcerting. Dont think I would react so nonchalantly as the main character.
Also, too short for me, would've enjoyed another page or two. Looking fwd to seeing how you develop this.
I thought it was hot...
Maybe a little rushed, but hot, nonetheless.
Very good story!!!
Congratulations!
Typo?
Should that be "Glen" instead of "Alan" in the last para?
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