I really like this. Your exploration of how it really must feel to the dominant is refreshing and presents a touch of reality, but in a loving, beautiful manner. Keep writing!
Love it! You had my full attention from the first line to the last. Sexy & loving...the build up is just divine. Don't be tempted to skip down as the beauty in this really is the build- slow, sensual and very hot!
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Wow
I really like this. Your exploration of how it really must feel to the dominant is refreshing and presents a touch of reality, but in a loving, beautiful manner. Keep writing!
Beautifully written
This is a great start, I am looking forward to your next piece. 5*
This is so hot!
Love it! You had my full attention from the first line to the last. Sexy & loving...the build up is just divine. Don't be tempted to skip down as the beauty in this really is the build- slow, sensual and very hot!
Hypnotizing
Incredible story. The words, the building rhythm - all of it. Just wonderful.
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