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My Swede (Sweet) Giant Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/27/15

OMG NO! You can't leave it there, what had happened!!

I am so happy you updated, I check everyday for any of your stories, I'm glad today was this one.

I'm anxiously awaiting your next piece.

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by fawnsage01/27/15

Don't tell me baby daddy wants his kid back after he abandoned them. Shame!
Love Sven and Cory! Can't wait for more

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by Anonymous01/27/15

Happiness

Come on they deserve some happiness, peace and joy with each other.
John needs to go on with his life.

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by Anonymous01/27/15

Solutions

Finally an update. Thanks. I have checked daily!!! This is one of my favorites.

I am glad her family is gone. The grandmother said a lot with few words. I'm gals she advised Cordelia. Sven and Cordelia needed to be by themselves as family again. There was too much tension for Cordelia.

Hopefully Sven have the money and connections that can handle John if he gets crazy.

Surely by now they are closer to solving the case of the nut that is still harassing the family.

Update soon.

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by Anonymous01/27/15

There are Giants, then there are GIANTS!!!!

Don't keep us waiting too long without an update.
Brain works overtime wondering what happens next😢

Sven has been too good and is good to his family for some jerk like John to bring trouble. Sven needs to show John what he can be like. Sven may seem like a gentle giant to Cordelia, but he is a giant when it comes to protecting what is his, his family.

Thanks for the update. Don't stay away too long.

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by ariesgirl01/27/15

Cory's grandmother gave her some great advice...I like her. Now she just need to keep using it and stay strong. She has no control over her family so there is no use in stressing over their behavior. I was hoping she would've told them off at least once.

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by Khamalani01/27/15

five.

I've missed these two!!

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by emj41701/27/15

Didn't John sign over his parental rights? Sven needs to hit him fast: legally, financially, and then assault him physically, on the down low.

Follow Granny's advice and get out of town, fast! Red can either focus the stalker tendencies elsewhere or follow them to Sweden--hard to find her body over there.

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John relinquished his patental rights and before Morgan was born, so what is his major malfunction? John had better not interfere with the adoption and them leavinf for Sweden. Can you make him disappear as in dead? I am so glad that Cory's overbearing family is gone. THANKS for the update!!!

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by Anonymous01/28/15

Man!!!!

I know John isnt real but I want to whoop his ass so bad!!!!! He better not fuck up the adoption!!!

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by Anonymous01/29/15

Umm . . . holes? Unless I'm missing something.

Did I miss a chapter somewhere? It seems like there's a lot of assuming I have to do while reading the story It's not as detailed as the first two chapters that I loved. This installment felt more like I was reading just two pages from in the middle of a chapter that should have included more details around her pregnancy and the stresses or specific events causing it like her family's stay, the stalker, John's interference, or an impending move to Sweden. Plus, if she had felt like her and Sven were growing apart, I'd've liked some dialogue or a flashback that supported the distant feelings. I don't know how many chapters you plan to do but please make smaller leaps in the story telling and add more details to make this a well-rounded tale. Thank you!

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by KittyOh4801/30/15

Sweet and sour!

Sweet because they love each other deeply! Sour because, John thinks he can waltz in an flex, when he signed his parental rights over months ago.
Not happening, John has no clue the fight he is in for and he definitively has no chance in hell! To win
5 stars
I am glad your back, I missed you!

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by Anonymous01/31/15

school student

where is that bitch at that was causing the trouble with them at the house and sve is her teacher at the collage.

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by fluer02/01/15

Punk ass John needs a good old fashion ass whup. He has never been there for Morgan. Now he wants to stir up trouble? Sven has been more of a man then John dream of. John did care when Cory was almost homeless nor has he ever contributed financially or emotionally. Lastly did that fucker forget her signed away his parental rights.

I wish Sven could break ever bone in John's body. Please let these adoption go though.

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by Anonymous02/03/15

When will we get an update?

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by Anonymous02/11/15

John who?

John didn't want anything to do with his own baby. He needs to go somewhere and leave this family alone.
Ready to see what this nut wants.
Please update.

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by Anonymous02/16/15

Plot Twist

Plot Twist John has something to do with Cordelia being stalked by the girl at Sven's college...... PLEASE UPDATE SOON :)

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Update

Update this please, the story is going along really well

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by Anonymous03/27/15

Nice

Nice story please finish

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by Anonymous03/28/15

what!?

John and the red head need to be dealt with! Please finish! ❤

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by nienier04/05/15

John the A$$

WTH does John want? He gave up his rights and it was not under deres or prompting from Cordelia in fact he left like a coward and her with nowhere to go and having to pawn her valuables just to make it another day. Now she happy somewhat and he wants to add his craziness to the fire.

I tell you when it rains it pours. I hope he has not grounds for anything. Melanie crazy, unstable ass needs to be caught and her sidekick talking about she didn't want her to be mad @ her really?

Loved that the family woke up and smelled the coffee but damn they the kind of family to be loved from a distance a long distance.

I love Sven I need me a big Viking God in my life :D

Thank u for sharing I hope to see another update soon.

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by Shinhwa11204/28/15

Grr... Go away john!!

Just when I thought john was just a bad memory he pops back right up. He left on his own free will no one forced him to go.. Swear him and the red head should just meet up and fall madly in live with one another. Two crappy people who deserve one another

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by MeMizzy06/02/15

Really! John?!

He voluntarily, signed away his rights! Go away and stay away. Can't wait to see where this story goes next.

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by kamill07/09/15

That last love scene was kind of confusing to me. I couldn't tell for sure what position they were in.
I kind of welcome John's reappearance. 1) I'd like to know what changed his feelings after Morgan was born. 2) I want to see Sven drop his goofy persona when it comes time to protect and claim Morgan as his child; bcs I'm sure his inner viking is just one more mishap/confrontation/Barbie Doll away from bringing hell to someone's front door.
PLEASE tell me you are finishing this story. I see that it been months since the last update, but I'm really holding out hope that you wont leave Sven and Cory on a cliffhanger

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by GoesGrunt07/09/15

Hoping

Here's hoping inspiration and opportunity conspire with you to bring us the rest of the story. It's been fantastic so far and I'm very much looking forward to the rest.

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by Anonymous08/21/15

Pretty Please Update

Six,almost seven months is way to long between updates,

DarkBlush you are a gifted and creative writer and have made Cordelia and Sven one of my all time favorite couples on this site. I thank you immensely for your efforts,but this saga has to much potential to go to waste. I am a sucker for a good love story and this is one of the best I have read on this site. Please keep writing or at least give us an update in the comments section.

P.S. What is the exact age difference between Cordelia and Sven? not that it matters but my guess is that Cordelia is between 23-25 and Sven is 29-32. Just Curious that's all

To my fellow C&S fans if you want to read about a similar couple I recommend Lynn and Lief Forevermore. It is already up to chapter 60 and is slow paced, Some Chapters are one page,some are five, but it is well worth the read. In fact if these two
couples met up in a collaberation story that would be awesome.

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by Anonymous11/08/15

Wanting chapter 7!

Please please update! This the greatest story I've read on here ever and I'm filled with anticipation over what's gonna happen next!

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by Anonymous12/02/15

Please continue the most amazing story I've read on here you have to finish it please please please

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by Anonymous02/29/16

Continue

Please finish soon!!!

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by Lulu22205/11/16

Please complete

I keep coming back hoping there's more. I've read this so many time. Please finish

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by Anonymous07/01/16

Please

Please finish the story; please.

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by Anonymous01/15/17

Last story 2015 01 27

Dear DarkBlush,

are you all right? You haven´t published any in the last 2 years.

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