"Yes, Mistress Valerie"

that's it?

Even for a continuing story, that was abrupt. It's like a movie that didn't finish; they just cut the film at the 30 minute mark. This had potential, but until you can add more, and/or at least have a better segue, you get a 2.

Please contine

Nice start. I like stories where girls have tiny tits. I especially like lesbian stories with girls with tiny tits. Please continue. Thanks for the good start.

Sorry I ended it so abruptly

@jed11: I wrote this beforehand, so i'm editing it and releasing it in a chapter format.

nice start

Nice start.... I hope that dungeon bag is really full!

@anonymous: oh it is