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by Anonymous01/27/15

Sorry but this was a complete miss

And I read it twice. Way to convoluted and at the end I just scratched my head and wondered, yet again, what I had just read. In the attempt to be clever, you got lost in the woods. This was just one big mess. Hopefully February will be a better month for you.

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by Anonymous01/27/15

Too clever by half

Just tell the damn story !

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by Anonymous02/01/15

Huh? Confusing

I don't understand the ending - what could be so horrifying that both the mother and the father commit suicide? And while the eldest and youngest sons died, didn't their children survive? Couldn't they have been the heirs?

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