You thought this was what? Clever? Interesting? Erotic? Entertaining? You failed. This was simply one person torturing another human being. What's to like about that? No stars for this utter drivel.
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Anonymous01/31/15
Meh
Again please ignore the hater trolls. I love femdom stories! I do feel your other chapters were better though. I like your writing but this one seemed to be missing something. Wish I had more specific constructive criticism. I do hope to see more chapters though! Thanks for sharing your work
Really?
You thought this was what? Clever? Interesting? Erotic? Entertaining? You failed. This was simply one person torturing another human being. What's to like about that? No stars for this utter drivel.
Meh
Again please ignore the hater trolls. I love femdom stories! I do feel your other chapters were better though. I like your writing but this one seemed to be missing something. Wish I had more specific constructive criticism. I do hope to see more chapters though! Thanks for sharing your work
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