The first request is that you don't continue this story. The second is that if you do, you put it in Fetish, where it belongs. 1 star, only because I can't vote 0 or negative numbers.
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Anonymous01/28/15
I agree with the previous commenter. I would like to add a third request: don't ever write anything for this website again.
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Anonymous01/31/15
Quirky...
I thought it was well written, and sexy, in a funny sort of a way. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. If this is the opening few chapters, I can't imagine where this one will end up.
As for the two comments above - just ignore them, the clergy have a nasty habit of... censorship, especially on [open] erotic story sits such as this.
Go on. Finish what you started. I can hardly wait.
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I have a two requests:
The first request is that you don't continue this story. The second is that if you do, you put it in Fetish, where it belongs. 1 star, only because I can't vote 0 or negative numbers.
I agree with the previous commenter. I would like to add a third request: don't ever write anything for this website again.
Quirky...
I thought it was well written, and sexy, in a funny sort of a way. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. If this is the opening few chapters, I can't imagine where this one will end up.
As for the two comments above - just ignore them, the clergy have a nasty habit of... censorship, especially on [open] erotic story sits such as this.
Go on. Finish what you started. I can hardly wait.
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