Just like Mike said: "In your dreams, buddy,"!!!!. And then he wake up...That's a good dream, with two buts...: 1st - a bus full of women of all ages and he gets the younguest?; 2nd - The women didn't knew him, but let him fuck bareback a young married woman? So for not admiting it was a dream, just 2 *...
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Anonymous01/29/15
Just awful
Maybe write fewer but better stories? This was awful.
Gave it a one star because I could not give it less.
A bus full of sluts who made one a whore. Cheaters should all die of painful disease, including the mechanic.
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Anonymous01/30/15
brilliant
an excellent total fantasy . I loved it and am only sorry I said such silly shitusing anonymous and lots of other silly names. Thamkyou ashon for brightening my day after all. I am just off to rub my pussy xxx
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Anonymous01/31/15
Change the title
Perhaps to , "The adventures of Sheila, the mindless slut."
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Anonymous02/02/15
It was not explicitly stated, but one got the impression.....
....that Sheila, although newlywed, wasn't being treated as well or as often as she deserved.
That doesn't justify her perfidy, she should rather be having constant and increasingly specific discussions with hubby, before sliding onto a foreign cock. Now having sampled it, and effectively destroying her marriage vows, what's to prevent hubby from whoring about with impunity as soon as he senses something has changed....and if he is not a complete dolt....he will.
What then, sweety? Will your life be what you imagined? And was the bus-borne fuck of a complete stranger worth it? You couldn't have stood up to the hatchet-faced whore, insisting that if she was so keen, it should be her riding the stud?.....ah, the will of a guilty people is never for honorable behavior....and your writing reflect the attitude that marriage vows are a casual thing, to be dropped in the toilet and flushed at the earliest opportunity.
Sad and shameful.
English
Thank you...
I enjoyed reading your story. Very easily worth 5 stars.
Easily worth two stars!
So be it....
How did he get to Mike's in the first place?
Dumb story. Does your mother know you're playing on her computer?
Go have a good wank and leave the writing to adults. This was moronic.
Just like Mike said...
Just like Mike said: "In your dreams, buddy,"!!!!. And then he wake up...That's a good dream, with two buts...: 1st - a bus full of women of all ages and he gets the younguest?; 2nd - The women didn't knew him, but let him fuck bareback a young married woman? So for not admiting it was a dream, just 2 *...
Just awful
Maybe write fewer but better stories? This was awful.
Gave it a one star because I could not give it less.
A bus full of sluts who made one a whore. Cheaters should all die of painful disease, including the mechanic.
brilliant
an excellent total fantasy . I loved it and am only sorry I said such silly shitusing anonymous and lots of other silly names. Thamkyou ashon for brightening my day after all. I am just off to rub my pussy xxx
Change the title
Perhaps to , "The adventures of Sheila, the mindless slut."
It was not explicitly stated, but one got the impression.....
....that Sheila, although newlywed, wasn't being treated as well or as often as she deserved.
That doesn't justify her perfidy, she should rather be having constant and increasingly specific discussions with hubby, before sliding onto a foreign cock. Now having sampled it, and effectively destroying her marriage vows, what's to prevent hubby from whoring about with impunity as soon as he senses something has changed....and if he is not a complete dolt....he will.
What then, sweety? Will your life be what you imagined? And was the bus-borne fuck of a complete stranger worth it? You couldn't have stood up to the hatchet-faced whore, insisting that if she was so keen, it should be her riding the stud?.....ah, the will of a guilty people is never for honorable behavior....and your writing reflect the attitude that marriage vows are a casual thing, to be dropped in the toilet and flushed at the earliest opportunity.
Sad and shameful.
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