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Widow's Windows

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/29/15

What

A great story this is but I expect that the war events mentioned actually happened to many of the men of the services in WW1,and of course in subsequent wars.

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by Boyd Percy01/29/15

Excellent

Stories like yours are why I continue to read Literotica.

Boyd

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by Anonymous01/29/15

Damned Good !

You handle time well; and the references to an ex-soldier are spot on as far as I can see.
Thank you
HP

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by Anonymous02/05/15

Well done indeed.

Kindly ignore "a joke" in comments, as one can always tell the jealous poseurs from the stench freely emanating.

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LIKED IT

This is the first of Lit's non-erotic stories I've read; I must say it is very good. Thanks for taking the time. I wish you luck!

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by Anonymous02/13/15

I'm confused

In this story, the window cleaner is Roger Bird, and he has a son named Art. In "Blue-Eyed Nurses", the narrator is Roger Bird, and he has a son named Bobby. Does Roger have more than one child, or is this just a continuity error between two stories? Or should each "Roger Bird" be considered a separate character?

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by Spencerfiction02/13/15

I'm obviously confused too!

My apologies, Anonymous for confusing you. No, the two Roger Birds are unconnected and hadn't realised I had used the name twice. I generally select names from the 6500 in my family tree, and in various combinations. Some names appear solid and reliable and others a bit flighty, so I pick and mix as required.

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by loveoverlust11/11/15

A window to relationships .....

..... through war & peace.
A simple tale of life long relationships. Quite enjoyable.
Thanks for sharing.

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by bruce2201/21/17

Well Organized story of several lives

An intelligent apresentation of vignettes that tell a tremendous amount story.

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