Party Deep

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needs an editor
has no point
husband doesn't appear to care OR get excited
just really, where were you going with this?

I've read some really bad stories

but this one has topped them all. to bad I couldn't have voted a "0".

For Real

I like this story. Wives need parting and all sex once in a while. Husbands should let their wife have this happen. My wife use to drink a lot. When we got married she could not have kids. I let her have a good time at parties. Connie loved to drink and show her body. Men would love to play and have sex with her. She would take on our friends. Our friends kept her safe. They would bring friends around for her for sex. My co-worker would meet her and then tell me about it and some aid they wish their wives would do this. Most of them did this and I did it to them. Leave yor wives have fun and you will like it

jeeez

What's the point here writing shit like this? the loving wife topic REALLY becomes a drag , this is just another story about the same messed up people ,utterly uninteresting,i gave it one * for the effort

I have to agree with the comments...

I have to agree with the comments...This is one of the worst stories in LW...And that says it all about it...

Wow

another true to life story... NOT my cup of tea..There are couples like this out there..

Cuck story without disclaimer....

1*

Just plain awful

No more needs to be said.

you mean a moron don't you

I left off the "d" but then you should "Die"

To previous commenter:

What?

Rubbish!!

Please don't write any more.

To be honest....

...no one, not even the wimpiest little coward would leave his unconcious wife with a few drunk rapiests, risking them passing her all kinds of STD´s. Leaving her totally unprotected in her own house with those social and mental drop-outs while "going to work" is far beyond anything I could accept could possibly happen. Even if she failed him, - he failed far more, just standing by, watching. Perhaps it would have been more appropriate to point out the differences between being a cuck or simply "yellow". I do not like cuckolds - but I would hate the behaviour he showed. Sorry...but this story was not enjoyable for me.Fetched too far to be a good read.

Not great

1*

This writer is one sick f_ _ k

Get a life and quit writing. You sicko

This is suppose to be exciting?

Wife with an alcohol problem, punishment for her, allows the STATUTORY RAPES TO CONTINUE. Yes, this is exciting. I agree with some of the others. This is sick for a story.

Hey, write whatever you want.

It makes it so much easier to spot the subhumans who figured out how to use a word processor. I'm really trying to be sympathetic for a sick fuck like you. But you need to admit your illness and go get some help. I'm embarrassed to admit you and I share the same genus and species.

andromon

You need to be removed from the gene pool immediately. If you have children they should be sanctioned also. There are already too many sick fucks breathing good air.

Trouble is

Trouble is there are perverts like this sick SOB. -5

Agree

What they said!

Gotta Read It!

I was checking the comments to see if the story is worth reading, and if you got some Anonymous weenie this upset, I assume it's a fantastic story and I'd better read it. Doing so right after I post this.

The flurry of comments above is precious! I'm loving it.

Yuck and Blah

You seem to thrive on negative reinforcement. If that gives you your jollies okay. To me, it was gross and monotone.

FROM A WIFE TO A NYMPH

and is loved by all. TK U MLJ LV NV

Missing

one thing missing ,
if you were going to treat your wife in this way
then surely you would start charging a fee to each of the party guests ??

if you are going to treat her like a gangbang whore , then at least get the money for it .
lol

Smart cuckold

He knows she is a nympho, so why fight it. But after all this time, he should have learned to eat and love creampie. Lets read some more chapters.

Were You Unaware

Of the Nonconsent/Reluctance category? Or the Fetish category?

Superbly done.

I'd love a turn with her whilst you hump my wife.

tasteless trash

a common slut and a brainless provider and who got revenge on whom?

I got revenge on you. Hope that's clarified now. Thanks for commenting, dear anonymous reader!

Gave this dung a 1*

Why don't you write a real erotic story, not this shit.