You just know how to get the juices flowing with your writing. Loved the story, and loved the Brazilian couple too.
Now that's how a swimming pool should be used. Nice work.
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Instant hard on!!
You just know how to get the juices flowing with your writing. Loved the story, and loved the Brazilian couple too.
Hmmmmm
Now that's how a swimming pool should be used.
Nice work.
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