Carrie's unexpected behaviour and she's about to get nude for the swim. This certainly seems a follow up to Ch. 1 to me. Maybe a bit subtle for some.
Excellent build up. Looking forward to what comes next.
One small thing. I, nor any one in my family, knew what TP meant. It is not a common abbreviation in Australia. Suggest you use the non abbreviation the first time you mention it. This would save us having to interrupt the story to Google it.
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Anonymous01/29/15
Maybe I'm getting too old!
Can some please translate this into English for me.
"TP a house"...?
"cornball softie"...?
"threw three interceptions"...?
TPing = toilet papering the trees and bushes around a house, and perhaps the house itself, as if with garlands or Christmas lights ... a juvenile prank, not harmful, only irritating to clean up.
throwing interceptions = when a pass in American football is caught by a player of the opposing team (intercepted), the quarterback is said to have thrown the interception, like the poor fool did it on purpose, even when he's not necessarily at fault.
cornball softie ... actually an old person should be more likely to recognize these corny soft old slang terms, ha ha. Cornball is the same as corny, softie means soft ... both mean sentimental, embarrassing and wimpy.
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Ch 2 ?
This certainly isn't a continuation of Ch 1
Carrie's unexpected behaviour and she's about to get nude for the swim. This certainly seems a follow up to Ch. 1 to me. Maybe a bit subtle for some.
Excellent build up. Looking forward to what comes next.
One small thing. I, nor any one in my family, knew what TP meant. It is not a common abbreviation in Australia. Suggest you use the non abbreviation the first time you mention it. This would save us having to interrupt the story to Google it.
Maybe I'm getting too old!
Can some please translate this into English for me.
"TP a house"...?
"cornball softie"...?
"threw three interceptions"...?
ok, in the spirit of helpfulness ...
TPing = toilet papering the trees and bushes around a house, and perhaps the house itself, as if with garlands or Christmas lights ... a juvenile prank, not harmful, only irritating to clean up.
throwing interceptions = when a pass in American football is caught by a player of the opposing team (intercepted), the quarterback is said to have thrown the interception, like the poor fool did it on purpose, even when he's not necessarily at fault.
cornball softie ... actually an old person should be more likely to recognize these corny soft old slang terms, ha ha. Cornball is the same as corny, softie means soft ... both mean sentimental, embarrassing and wimpy.
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