This is not incest. If had gucked his cousin then okay. But this is a story about him nailing his cousins wife. That means it's just a guy fucking a woman.
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Anonymous01/28/15
This story is what happens...
when you give a 12 year old internet access.
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Anonymous01/28/15
every cliche in the book
Sorry, nothing 'original' here...
I really try to encourage writers, because I am one (or try to be) & I know its not easy. However, I'm going to break that 'rule'.
You should have sent this as a 'How To' story - ie:
How to write something utterly devoid of originality.
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Good short story.....BUT
This is not incest. If had gucked his cousin then okay. But this is a story about him nailing his cousins wife. That means it's just a guy fucking a woman.
This story is what happens...
when you give a 12 year old internet access.
every cliche in the book
Sorry, nothing 'original' here...
I really try to encourage writers, because I am one (or try to be) & I know its not easy. However, I'm going to break that 'rule'.
You should have sent this as a 'How To' story - ie:
How to write something utterly devoid of originality.
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