All Comments on 'Melissa's Story Ch. 08'

Great story, but did you have to kill off my favorite couple? Please, please let them be rescued.

please wright more of this story i love it . it's one of my fav.

i hope they will get rescued and more stories will follow because i love the Master Matt and melissa's storys...

OH,i'm so sad what a sad ending to a wonderful story...please let them be found and continue on....i have never read anything on this url that has stirred me so nor been so detailed and wonderful. Thank you for giving us fans Your best and i will continue to read on as always with your further submissions. Thank You kindly, Sir. a fan in Texas

I have spent the past couple days reading your story and I must say that I was a bit disappointed at the ending. While I appreciate the artistic bravery it takes to kill your main characters, I do wish Master Matt and Melissa hadn't had to vanish so. It left for quite an abrupt and upsetting finish.

Still, it was a great story nonetheless :)

I've just spent a fantastic afternoon reading this sequence and loved the lot! However, like others, I hope that Matt & Melissa weren't lost. The last two paragraphs are additionally poignant after the Tsunami of Dec 04, and I hope they are found alive.

TooKay

wow. i loved your story. it was great. but PLEASE let matt and melissa be okay. please????

O please have a heart! I loved all 8 chapters spent weeks reading all of them and several more of your submissions. Please continue this one on to them being rescued. Not fair to leave it hanging, are they dead, alive, hurt what?! I do love them though. lol

This is such a wonderful story, it speaks of a very loving relationship. I can only envy both the characters for this...

Although the final paragraph is horrible and sudden, I can understand how the ultimate romantic ending for such a great love would be to die in each other's arms.

This is the first of your stories I've read, but I promise you I'll read each and every one from now.

kiss,

Monique.

please say they woke up late or something or everyone is okay dont just end it like this

Loved the Melissa stories, but you had to kill them off at the end?? Hated that!!

I really enjoyed the story. It was interesting, intriguing, funny, certainly sexy and many different things by turn. I would love to ask you why you made the decision to kill them off at the end. That surprised me as it did the other readers who commented.

I have enjoyed this series and all of the other stories you have written. I know first hand how frustrating it is to have urges and needs that aren't met and to yearn for that sense of completion in finding your One.

I know it is just a fictional writing but I was very caught up in the relationship between Matt and Melissa and my heart literally lurched and then fell when I read the final two paragraphs. To have it all and then have it gone ~sigh~. How heartbreaking!!

I loved the story it was good. I would love to find me a Master Matthew!

But the ending is not what i expected.

Why...why, after all that, all the investment into the characters and the story, after enjoying good character development and entertaining storylines in each chapter...why would you end with the implication that everyone dies, especially immediately after the promise of a "happily ever after" with the proposal?

Loved the story up until the apparent plane crash...it took the whole story with it, in my opinion. In an edited version, I'd take that plane crash ending out - super disappointing. For such a small section in comparison to the rest of the story, it really has a huge impact in painting the entire story negatively (especially considering how good the story is/was). :(

Sorry to rant, but I really loved this story and that last paragraph made me feel cheated and I just think "why"?!

Absolutely love the (very) surprise ending. Go out on a high.

It can't just end

This is sooo well written. I almost cried when i read the part about the crash. Please write more similar to this

Hugs!

Ashley Kat

Ну и зачем было заканчивать такую шикарную историю таким унылым концом? Как будто в реальном мире нам мало разочарований и боди, так ещё и в книгах такой облом. Печально это все.

1-6 was great. 7-8 was a let down

I need you in my life!