nice, but rushed. a few editing errors. not to mention that fact that the artist was worried that yelling in the house might upset the kids.... what would they think when they saw their dad banging the naked sitter on their couch? at least move the punishment into the studio where the kids cant go. overall a good read. got me hard, but was too short for the happy ending.
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nice, but rushed. a few editing errors. not to mention that fact that the artist was worried that yelling in the house might upset the kids.... what would they think when they saw their dad banging the naked sitter on their couch? at least move the punishment into the studio where the kids cant go. overall a good read. got me hard, but was too short for the happy ending.
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