All Comments on 'Taking Gwen'

I happen to enjoy both incest and non-consent, so this was right up my ally... Or so i thought. About mid-way through you make it seem as though he and her are total strangers, which is basically the opposite of incest. Maybe you were a bit confused, or drunk yourself writing this, but if you can clear that up, this story would be lovely. As it stands now... Please also check over it for typos, and grammar errors. I hope you continue to write for us!

Do your own Bwork. This story is on another site.

then he took Gwen. TK U MLJ LV NV

Plz add a secpnd story that is much longer. Impregnate her multiple times and mke it so that the first child is a girl that you end up impregnating as well when she turns 18.

A bit short a bit rushed but all in all pretty good.

Your narrative is inconsistent and your grammar is terrible. Far too distracting.

FUCKING GREAT

Make the child a girl that you end up impregnating as well when she turns 18. Then the cycle repeats!