this is off to a great start. i like the characters and am turned on, i am interested to see how it progresses and what humiliating domination happens. maybe some cuckolding? lots of ways it can go. for now John at Becky's feet is a good start
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Anonymous01/29/15
Stupidity runs amok
She wants change? Then give her the divorce the bitch deserves. Arguing with an angry man at a traffic accident is a sure way to get injured or dead. Nobody is stupid enough to get into a fight over a damaged car. It's just a car. Given Becky's response and then her attitude he should have manned up. And either packed his stuff and left or thrown her out. What a ridiculous story line that any man would take her abusive crap for even two seconds. She's clearly out of control and needs help. Even for fiction this was just plain stupid.
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This is a personal fantasy of mine. I wish my boyfriend would step up to the plate and put me on a leash. I just want a pretty collar gimme!
a great start
this is off to a great start. i like the characters and am turned on, i am interested to see how it progresses and what humiliating domination happens. maybe some cuckolding? lots of ways it can go. for now John at Becky's feet is a good start
Stupidity runs amok
She wants change? Then give her the divorce the bitch deserves. Arguing with an angry man at a traffic accident is a sure way to get injured or dead. Nobody is stupid enough to get into a fight over a damaged car. It's just a car. Given Becky's response and then her attitude he should have manned up. And either packed his stuff and left or thrown her out. What a ridiculous story line that any man would take her abusive crap for even two seconds. She's clearly out of control and needs help. Even for fiction this was just plain stupid.
superb start
i love it and hope you continue the story ,
looks like there is even potential with Linda
a gynarchy story ….
looking forward to the sequels ...
Love it!
I love the build up so far. Can't wait to see where it goes next. Will she bully him too?
Great start!
Original and realistic premise. Great touch with the purse! Hope to see more. Thanks for sharing!
Loved it
Great stuff, purse a super touch, please continue!
Nice start
Nice start.
Curious to see where she leads you.
A suggestion
Lose the "34D" breasts. You could say "full" or "generous" without giving cup size. Your punctuation needs a LOT of work.
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