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The Black Football Roommate and Gf Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by dirtyoman01/29/15

Why?

Why do all the posters have the BBC talking trash to the whitey women?? Calling them "Slut", "whore", & demanding they say their pussy is for blacks only & degrading shit like that. Thats all "Control Bullshit"!
Don't get me wrong, I like most of the catagories, Interracial, Mature, Loving Wives, & Incest, & some Lezbian. Not turned on by Gay male.

About this story. Well its not a bad story. Actually very typical of this theme.

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by Anonymous01/29/15

YAWN. try something original.

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by kuk4yoo01/29/15

Enjoyed!

Titillating story!

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by Anonymous01/29/15

Further

As DirtyO wrote, why do the white babes accept the demeaning language? It is one thing to like the BBC, but another to be called such names. Where is their female pride? Would be nice to see some payback.

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by Anonymous01/31/15

So tired of the big black cock bullshit on this site, the demeaning trash talk that goes with it, 1* come back when you can write something original.

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by Anonymous01/31/15

Irony

Every time I see a story like this, it reminds me of the black woman who is cheating on her black husband, with me. I love making her say she'll never touch a little nigger cock again, right before I start fucking real hard.

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by Anonymous01/31/15

more

Screw all this negative feedback. Please right more! I love the story

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by Anonymous02/03/15

Shut Up anonymous

Shut Up anonymous ur just jealous cuz you're not black and obviously not well hung You must have liked it because you read it all after knowing just from the title.

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by BethAndBobJ02/10/15

Loved the Story Keep writting

Loved you story. What I liked especially was Dana still deeply loved her BF. She tried to resist.
Hope you make things more opened up between all of them and they remain friends as Jason takes over. I like too, Dana is still intimate with her BF and loves him.

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by Anonymous02/13/15

Really hope you continue this series, and Dana gets knocked up.

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by Anonymous02/18/15

Loved the "I. CAN'T. BREATHE." part. Hahaha!

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by Anonymous02/24/15

So sexy

Please continue, ignore the haters.

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by Anonymous04/23/15

bbclover

can't wait to hear chapter 3

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by kuk4yoo04/26/15

Chapter 3

What Happened?

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by Anonymous05/01/15

can't wait for chapter three

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by Anonymous06/01/15

where is chapter 3????

you should write it soon.. this is one of the hottest stories ever written on here

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by Anonymous06/02/15

Will you transmit a third chapter?

Great story so far. Really enjoyed reading it. But now I am wondering how the story goees on. Maybe Jason will share her with his mates or impregnate her. Maybe he will take her away from her boyfriend. So please let us known how this goes on.

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by Anonymous06/05/15

good start

I like the chapters to be longer than you two current efforts. You have a good concept, excellent style, etc. This story has places it can go or you can start another, similar idea. Recently turned white girls introducing their white girl friends, perhaps prejudice ones, to black sex. Her bf needs to learn whether he is just a ckld or a bi-ckld.

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by Anonymous06/14/15

part 3 please

part 3 please

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by Anonymous06/22/15

The writer is typical for this site. He's stupid and too lazy to Google for facts. - 2 stars.

No human has an 11 inch cock but horses do so why didn't he write that a horse fucked his gf and she loved it. That would make as much sense.. 1 percent have 8" cocks and, and when erect, they hang down not up and they can't shoot sperm; they just ooze. A excited vagina is only 4 inches and will stretch up to 8". An 11 inch cock, if fully inserted would rip her vagina apart and would kill her if didn't go to the hospital. I know a baby may be that long but, that is a different situation that doesn't rip the vagina but may tear around her pussy.

And, why must the be such a wimp and only get off if another guy is fucking his gf.

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by Dragonfire1407/28/15

Editor, Please!

Your basic story line is good but it feels like it has a "wham, bam, thank you m'am" pace. Try some more details and slow it down a little. Also, for God sakes, have somebody edit. Too many spelling and grammar mistakes. They become annoying and take away from an otherwise decent story.

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by Dragonfire1407/28/15

Hey Anonymous - 6/22

Maybe you are the one who should do some Googling. According to my research the longest penis ever measured was 9 1/2 inches flaccid and 13 1/2 inches erect. So don't criticize unless you know for sure. Although I do agree, I don't know how a normal woman could take such a long appendage even if it was ONLY 11 inches!

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by Lucyflame02/22/17

He sure got cucked.

I love this story so much! I keep imagining him keeping his girlfriend to himself and his big, black cock. Her boifriend can only watch as he stretched her tight, little pussy and fills her defenceless, fertile white womb with his black seed, staining her heritage and ending her white bloodline. ;)

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