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by Anonymous01/31/15

annoyed

I wonder why the chapters don't line up nicely. Like I feel likemI'm missing details from one to the other and it's really slow moving.

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by Xvirgin02/01/15

Thanks for the comments

Annoying...thanks for the criticism. The four chapters are actually written as one piece with the chapters headings embedded in it. However, this was my first submission, and I wasn't sure how my pages would compare with the site's. In the future, I will add a tie-in from previous chapters.

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