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lovely
more, please!!
Part 2
Part 2 is pending! I'm sorry I didn't mention it would be multiple chapters, but it'll take a bit to build up. I promise more sexy things!
Aaack, crap!!! I'm so sorry!!!
I totally hit the wrong star button, and gave it a 1 instead of a 5. I really loved it, and hope you'll continue. This is VERY well written and almost completely free of errors. But more than that, your voice just leaps off the page! I promise I'll be more careful in my rating with the next chapter, just don't stop posting :(
I'm excited for part 2!
love love love this!!!
It was very well written and already has me wet with anticipation. I will be impatiently awaiting additional parts keep up the good work. ^_^
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